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Our forever sleep
covered by blankets
stitched together
by wrinkled hands
of ancient crones.
Our forever kiss
lips pressed tight
one breath
tongues intertwined
Our forever sex
hips pressed tight
one body
legs intertwined
Our forever love
made by you
made by me
and then
taken by them.
Our forever
just got broken
and stolen away
My forever is now alone.
covered by blankets
stitched together
by wrinkled hands
of ancient crones.
Our forever kiss
lips pressed tight
one breath
tongues intertwined
Our forever sex
hips pressed tight
one body
legs intertwined
Our forever love
made by you
made by me
and then
taken by them.
Our forever
just got broken
and stolen away
My forever is now alone.
This one is dedicated to ~Halfling as an apology for being short with her. 
Sorry!
Sorry! © 2009 - 2024 veinsrunempty
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Daaaw, I'm honored!! But you shouldn't feel bad. Everybody's got their off days. And as long as poems as pretty as this one comes out of your being short with me, by all means feel free to be short! And you know when I was reading it, it reminded me so much of "Alive With the Glory of Love" by Say Anything..Max Bemis got his inspiration from his grandparents who were separated during the Holocaust and put into concentration camps.
Sorry I've just now gotten around to even READING it! Thanks so much, man. It's beautiful..beautiful and tragic. Just how I like it.
